Production- Feedback

Candidate 1
"The range of shots and framing are good for the shots which are there"
"The movement is good as well" 
"The pace is not bad, its slightly slow compared to the song"
"cutting to the beat is good and works well with the narrative" 
"lip syncing is slow, not giving a sense of realism"

Candidate 2

"Track and pan are really good" 

"A whole range of shots have been used" 

"we're still unsure of the narrative, but thats due to lack of shots" 

"lip syncing is perfect" 

"cutting to the beat, very nice and neat"

"maybe experiment with some transitions?" 

"locations and costume connect well with the song" 

"the jump into the shot with sam was creative" 

"change of costume suits the sense of music" 

Candidate 3

"Framing is good, especially the cloud shot with Sam's back to the camera"

"There is a variety of shots"

"Lip syncing, 19 seconds, a bit slow" 

"Follows the narrative storyline of the music video, narrative could be clearer in terms of whether if the artist is a part of the narrative of separate?" 

Candidate 4

"Good framing!"

"Good range of shots, close ups, maybe add more angles?"

"The camera movement is a little too fast, the pans need to be slower"